tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588444746472458564.post5555533171932732777..comments2012-02-02T09:09:58.012-08:00Comments on The Writing Desk Raven: The Dead Never Lie - Chapter OneClareShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05595812373360111371noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588444746472458564.post-71991562984456638362011-09-07T14:16:55.310-07:002011-09-07T14:16:55.310-07:00In just this one post you've created tension, ...In just this one post you've created tension, fear and curiosity. Where is she? All we know is she is in house. How did she get there? She was lured by a charming man but how exactly and who is he? This opening certainly raises lots of questions that as a reader I would want to find out the answers by reading more. Bring on chapter 2!Sue Fortinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05464191934479133090noreply@blogger.com